Written English

 

 

In Story Writing we are learning how to write our own stotries by ourselves. We will know we can do this when we can:

•  miss lines and leave finger spaces
• use time words like 'first', 'next', 'then' and 'finally in our plans and our stories
• say a sentence, remember it and write it
• use the feeling chart to help us use better words in our feeling statement. 

If you look at our stories you can see that we are getting better everytime we write a new story.

                                                                            

First we wrote about the Christmas Holidays. Lei had a fun time at his Grandma's house.

 

 

Next we wrote about what we did in the weekend. Daniel enjoyed playing with his little brother. 

 



 

 



 Melen had a walk with her family and some nice food. We all wish we had been with you Melen.

 

Then all the school went to the Life Education Caravan. We wrote about our visit. We used time words for the first time in this story . We used the words to help make the events in our recount happen in order.